General Ideas

Subject: Re: General Ideas Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:40 pm

I like the stories but I still think it would be better as a game than a film.

Subject: Re: General Ideas Sun Sep 02, 2007 4:57 pm

Hehe, yeah 75 votes... I voted a long time ago and I did vote for multiple characters (not 75 though!)... tongue

Okay, here's Mantis' latest work of art. He told me all this on MSN so I'm just going to copy everything he said and post it here.

(Mantis, feel free to fix all typos, make changes, add things, etc. It wouldn't be the first time for you to edit my posts anyway. Wink

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As you already know lloyd is know as Lloyd of the 5 lances.
because of the 5 lances he carries on his back and he at the moment is the strongest character.
There is no one at the moment who can easily beat him. Clovis is knows this.

But Clovis still send his best paladin in hopes that Calcor is injuried in the fight.
The ride to the monostery would take two days and they had to pass through a small woodland to ger there.
In the woodland 5paladins would ambush lloyd and Calcor.
Unknown to the paladins Lloyd was know they were following him and Calcor.

Once Lloyd and Calcor reach halfway through the woodland midday of the first day. Lloyd stop and let Prince Calcor rest.
"Prince Calcor I will go look for something to eat you stay here.'
"Okay Lloyd"
( paladin 1) "where the hell did that brat go?"
The paladin turn around to see why there wasn't a response.
When he turn around he saw something most frightful.
His comrades all had a lance in their chest.
and before he could react a lance pierce his heart, then the man pull a sword out of the lances and cut the paladin in half. To make sure he was died.
Screen switches to Calcor sitting next to the horse.
Lloyd holding a few wild birds in his hand ,"Prince Calcor this will do until we reach the monostery"

15 years has pasted and Calcor will final get to see his mother and sister again.
L:loyd, Calcor, and Felnor were to meet Maria and Celestine a small town on the Southern Mountains.
Malico and Rin decides not to follow Maria and Celestine into the town because they felt that this was a time for them.
So they waited outside the town.

Felnor being how he was he followed Calcor and Lloyd into the town.
They meet in a small inn in the town.
It was a happy reunion for everyone.
While Maria and Calcor were catching up.
Lloyd and Celestine was doing the same with some drink at the tavern.
As they cought up they became to relaxed.
They began to feel weird
Their began to worst.
And before they could react the tavern was filled with Clovis' men.
The whole town was filled with Clovis' men.

It was a trap from the beginning.
Celstine and lloyd were still able to put up a good fight, but the poisoning was spreading the more they fought.
that when they heard the voices of Maria, Calcor, and Felnor.
They were also attack, but they were able to fight them off.
Just as they reached Lloyd and Celestine.
Celestine faint, likely Lloyd was able to catch her.

( Calcor ) "Are you alright!"
( Lloyd ) "Yes, but barely."
Hurrry and get your mother out of her. The poison is spreading quickly you must get her out of here.
( Maria )"Malico is just outside the city he should be able heal mother and you too, lloyd."
( Felnor )"Eavan can carry us out of the town, but she can only carry 3 people four at most."
( Lloyd ) "That is good enough everyone hurry and leave."
( Calcor)"I won't leave you Lloyd."
Lloyd smalies and than knocks Calcor out with his lance.
( Lloyd ) "Felnor when Calcor wakes up give him this."
*Acquire Lloyd *insert cool ass weapon name**
( Felnor )"Alright I'll make sure of it."

Just as they fly away a rain of night and fire arrows come down upon the town. Wounds lloyd an long with the remain soldiers.
and setting the town on fire.
The poison was getting to Lloyd he could barely move his body now.
And from the blaze Clovis' image appears.
( Clovis )"Lloyd long time not see"in that evil smirk of his.
Lloyd could barely stand he saw that Clovis was about to attack but he could anything.
Clovis then lance Lloyd.
( Calcor )"You are much weaker that I remember Lloyd"
( Lloyd) "I'm I?"
With the last bit of strength Lloyd is able to grab his lance and wound Clovis.
Lloyd then falls to the ground.
This little wound is nothing. Clovis puts his hand over the wound and it heal.
He found out the sercet to the lance and its ability to heal the owner.
As Clovis walk out of the town he order the archer to set it a blaze.

Malico is able to heal Celestine, but she has to rest for many days.
When Calcor wakes up and is told of what had happens he begins to cry inside.
Lloyd was like a father to him.
Everyone return to the Village in the forest.
calcor decides to sleep in the forest one.
He held Lloyd's lance as he look at the night sky.
Calcor fell asleep and when he woke up he lance was gone and in its place was his axe ( Calcor recieve his axe before Lloyd's death.) but there was something strange about it now.
He soon realized what it was.
His axe now hid Lloyd's sword that made his *nsert cool ass weapon name* so special was now apart of the axe.
That morning Calcor promise to kill the man responsible for all of this.

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Subject: More stories Sat Oct 27, 2007 12:26 am

Anyways I'm back FOR now. I have stories on how Calcor and Lloyd meet Felnor and how Malico and Company meet Ella after the incident involving Lloyd's death. Message me if you want to hear.

Subject: Re: General Ideas Sat Oct 27, 2007 4:21 am

It's good to have you back, mantis! Cool

Ah, you've been working on more stories! Niiiiice... drunken

Subject: Re: General Ideas Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:56 pm

Jose is it alright if I delete your posts also that relates to the story?

Subject: Re: General Ideas Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:04 am

Yeah, that's okay. Do as you must.

Subject: Re: General Ideas Sat Feb 09, 2008 3:57 pm

Lol that character poll is still up there.

Okay guys, It'll be a while before I can re-acquire that FPS system and all its expansion packs, but once I get it I'll make a short demo. I think we should at least start on Gothis even if we don't get very far...the main challenge is going to be designing and texturing 3D models of our own, the rest of the coding stuff is extremely easy to compile. So in the meantime, test your skills at rendering & stuff.

Actually I have an idea...if it's okay w/ Mantis, the "contest guy", I think we should have a 3D modeling contest where everyone uses the same engine to create the best model possible. Whoever wins, we'll put the model into the game as sort of an "easter egg"...a secret you can find on a certain level. Or it might fit into the game better, who knows. Just an idea.
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